I never knew that by marrying Rex , It would cause me this much pain . Marriage is supposed to be a happy thing . Isn’t it ? Well i know for a fact it shouldn’t be like this , I shouldn’t be feeling like i’m walking on egg shells around my house , I shouldn’t feel like my house is a bomb that could go off at any moment , My day to day life is a constant war , And Im done . My body started to drain empty , My mind went blank . There was no point in living anymore . I knew i had a family , I knew i had a purpose to live , But none of that compared to the feeling of loneliness i felt inside . My body felt as if it were a skeleton , walking on air . Suicidal thoughts brought to me with no advisory . At this point , all i thought about was trying the rope around my neck .
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Add Yours →Hi Vale,
You need to pay careful attention to your capitalisation and grammar. There are many mistakes in your writing. Extra spaces, capitals where there shouldn’t be and none when there should be. These are issues that will negatively impact your writing.
You are also starting your sentences frequently with “I…” This creates a problem with repetition and so it is important that you change up your sentence starters. Focus on breaking up your paragraph into smaller mini-paragraphs as well to create more powerful effects in your writing.
Thank you
Mr Johnson